Hi Writers,
I'm new to the Lounge, and was hoping to start a regular script/notes swap during the Summer. I read your script and you read mine, and we provide each other with professional coverage/script notes.
I just finished my first year at UCLA graduate school for screenwriting, and I'm told I have a great sense of story and give excellent notes! I write satire, thriller, dark comedy, sci-fi, and political thrillers, but I'm open to reading any feature or pilot.
Here is the feature that I am looking for notes on:
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Genre: Thriller/Dark Comedy
Logline: When his date's car is broken into and her laptop stolen, a repressed office worker hunts the homeless thief across Los Angeles to reclaim his masculinity.
Comps: Good Time meets Taxi Driver
I'm hoping to submit this to BlackList Labs in a couple of weeks, so all notes or feedback are appreciated.
Let me know if you want to swap scripts and I'll send you my email address ;)
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Hi @Nick! So glad that you're here! I hope some people take you up on the swap since I know I see a lot of writers asking around about this. I would also recommend checking out the Writers' Room if you're not a member already, there's a weekly Coverage Report where members give feedback on each other's scripts that you might like!
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Welcome Nick! Nice to meet you. Glad you're here.
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Hi Nick! Great idea. Lets chat.
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I would be up for reading.
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Hi Nick, all good, add me/ send me your email and will do. I just need 5 days on it.
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Welcome! I’m also new too! I write horror, so I’d love to read your script too.
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Hi Nick, I recommend checking out our script services (https://www.stage32.com/scriptservices/coverage). You can work with an executive of your choosing to get feedback on your script to get it in perfect shape. Once that's done, I recommend you take a look at our best in class screenwriting contests (https://www.stage32.com/scriptservices/contests). Cheers!
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Welcome to the community, Nick. I'll swap screenplays with you. My email is mrphyjammusashi@yahoo.com