Your Stage : Action/Sci-fi book trailer by Luis A. Colon

the trailer looks really good. I wish you good luck!

D..mn those Hadrians ask difficult questions... yes you should write a screenplay too.

PS: I like the trailer

Mr. Tognanhou, you're hijacking Mr Colon's post here trying to merge two completely different and un-mergeable ideas without Mr. Colon asking for it.

Great trailer and poster, Luis A. Colon!

Hey, Tognanhou Serge Paul. I agree with Rutger Oosterhoff. Geoff Hall talked with you about the same thing the other day. I removed your comment from Luis' post. You're welcome to post your promotion in the Your Stage Lounge (www.stage32.com/lounge/promotion) and on Your Wall.

OK, all my apologies

This is great, I’m trying to upload a science-fiction teaser that I produced but I’m having a hard time getting it uploaded.

Feels epic! good choice of music. The images work well. My issues are with the movement and timing of the text, and the text itself. The vertical scroll (Star Wars style?) makes it hard to read, as the words are moving too fast to process sometimes. The way the sentences are broken up, I had to watch it twice to understand the pitch. As a summary of the premise, I think it could benefit from some workshopping. What is the thing the aliens want? Why is it the woman's fate to fight them? What are her personal stakes? Saving the world is not enough. If you want to post the text here, It would be easier to comment on than in video form.

Thank you all for your thoughts.

You're welcome, Luis A. Colon.

@Louis Awesome bold & visceral trailer, hooked even without moving visuals. One thing I’d do that’s not a criticism but more I’m of an age eyesight not perfect. White small print moves rapidly upwards & if reader doesn’t catch it vital plot points are lost. Be better static & under the scenes. Look forward to reading.