Screenwriting : Log lines for: :Based on a true Story" by Jon Christopher

Jon Christopher

Log lines for: :Based on a true Story"

Good morning, all! Anyone know if there is a singular or "best" approach to use when crafting a log line for a script based on a true story or historical personage. Thanks for your thoughts on the matter.

Sarah Brockmann

I simply wrote "based on a true story" after the actual logline

Ty Strange

Like Sarah Brockmann alluded too, loglines don't usually reference the true nature of the story. That's more a selling/marketing feature, though there are examples of it being included in the logline, such as from

- THE BLIND SIDE: "The story of Michael Oher, a homeless and traumatized boy who became an All-American football player and first-round NFL draft pick with the help of a caring woman and her family."

and

- PAINKILLER (2023): "The causes and consequences of America's opioid epidemic unfold in this drama following its perpetrators, victims and an investigator seeking the truth."

Other based-on-a-true-story movies that don't reference their true nature are:

- THE ROOKIE (2002): A Texas baseball coach makes the major league after agreeing to try out if his high school team made the playoffs.

- MCFARLAND, USA (2015): Jim White moves his family after losing his last job as a football coach, and at his new school he turns seven disappointing students into one of the best cross-country teams in the region.

Jon Christopher

Okay, thanks, All, for taking time to offer your insights.

Dan Guardino

Anthony Murphy is right you need to say it on the cover page. As far as a logline goes do whatever you want but make sure they know it is based on a true story. If it isn't historical they will want to make sure you have the rights to it.

Jon Christopher

The Cover Page, of course, warrants as much, however, it is, or was, the logline specifically that caused me to make this inquiry. Thanks, All for your input. I think I get it.

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