I just finished my first attempt at a screenplay, based on my short story: The Club of Silence. It's a twisted-western-horror, rated R. Twenty-three pages. I'm hoping to find a few people willing to beta-read and provide feedback: story, formatting, etc...whatever you see that needs to be corrected, improved, etc... Splash the pages with red ink! No need for kid gloves, I have a thick skin and learn fastest from my mistakes. :)
Logline: An old west bad guy bent on revenge stops in a prairie town to scratch an itch, but he gets more than he bargained for when he encounters a nymphomaniac demon disguised as a prostitute.
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Oh I'd love to read this for you! I don't have final draft, but if you send a pdf I could make notes!
Ciara Smith Awesome! Thank you! I am trying to figure out how to send a PDF via the private messages...is there a trick to it here? LOL And no worries, I don't have final draft either. ;)
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Oh you could send it to ciara.smith0331@gmail.com !
Ciara Smith Done! :)
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I look forward to reading it!
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I Would Love To Read It send it to myimgtvgmail.com
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Sure, send it over. But give me some time. My email address is roosterhoff@outlook.com
Thank you, Marciano Hendricks and Rutger Oosterhoff ! I'll go do that right now! <3
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That sounds so unique! I would love to read that. My email is lv2clenhotmail.com
Justin Chomitzky I just emailed it to you, thank you! :)
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Congratulations. How many drafts have you done?
Desiree Middleton Since it is based on a short story I published years ago I just did the initial screenplay verbatim, and then went back through it a couple times, tweaking the story to adapt "inner dialog" for visual/audio medium, then saved that as "2" because it's altered from the original story.
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@Sallie Sounds an interesting Urban Horror/Western. I don’t mind looking it over if you message me an email.
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Hi Sallie, would love to read and offer feedback
Debbie Croysdale N. "Key" Ali I'd be happy to send it to you both, I just need your email addresses (maybe they're hiding right under my nose and I'm just not seeing them? LOL)
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Sorry about that, nk.keyali@gmail.com
N. "Key" Ali Sent! Thank you! :)