Screenwriting : My First Nearly Perfect Pitch Session by Xavion Niles

Xavion Niles

My First Nearly Perfect Pitch Session

I've been doing pitch sessions on Stage32 for about a year now and I think the most frustrating thing I've encountered is the re-writing process and trying to incorporate the feedback from different execs with different wants/needs. How do you please everyone in just 2 pages while also making your pitch engaging enough to get a "request"? It's hard LOL and I usually get a mixture of 2's & 3's or 3's & 4's.

However, I recently pitched my fantasy Christmas rom-com, "Ryder's Christmas Comeback", and even though the exec passed on reading the script because they were looking for more realistic rom-coms, I received all 5's with only one 4 and it makes me optimistic that I'm on the right track. I entered this same movie into the current rom-com contest so we'll see what happens fingers crossed but I just wanted to share this to say that as writers we get face a lot of L's so we need to celebrate our W's where we can, no matter how big or small.

Maurice Vaughan

Congratulations on receiving all 5's and one 4, Xavion Niles! Very impressive! Hope you find the right exec for your script and get the contest W!

Karmin Mosley

Congratulations on your positive feedback! You can feel down with not making progress in your field. I've had several script requests, and sometimes waiting on a "yes" and receiving a "no" can break your confidence. This industry is tough, and remaining encouraged can be a daily task. However, I love that you mentioned that you have to celebrate the little wins until you can reach the big ones. I wish you all the success in the future, Xavion Niles. I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to add you to my network.

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