Hey friends
Just finished writing a new short. My husband is usually my go-to for reading my first drafts, but he's preoccupied with his graduate studies. Would anyone be interested in reading and giving feedback? Happy to swap and give your script feedback as well.
Genre: Horror/Thriller
Title: Sundowning
Page Count: 12
Logline idea: A home health aide caring for a wealthy, elderly dementia patient is unnerved when the patient’s cryptic references to 'the man upstairs' start to manifest as eerie disturbances in the house.
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hey Rachel Troche i actually have something around the same length ( : i would love to share it with you , dm me your email and ill send it to you and you can send me yours !
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Hi Rachel, I have a 6-page horror/comedy I'd be glad to swap to get some feedback. Feel free to DM me.
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I'll for sure be glad for us to exchange scripts and share review. But I'm afraid mine is way lengthier than yours. It's 71 pages. I've not yet completed it
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This is a great idea. My script is 91 pages long though.
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I can read it and give you some feedback. Logline sounds interesting :)
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Thanks everyone! I sent some directly via email but if it's easier, I uploaded the script with my logline in my profile. Looking forward to any and all feedback!
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Love to see this exchanging of scripts! Great logline Rachel Troche!
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Rachel Troche I'll read yours and you read mine
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Hi Rachel,
I would like to read your work.
But I'm still working on mine.
Maybe when I'm finish you can. Is that okay with you?
Will also add you to my network.
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Rachel Troche, your logline gives me terror tingles.
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Dianne Politud I'd love that!
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Paul Rivers haha, terror tingles, that's awesome. glad it resonates!
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Rachel Troche , great logline!