Introduce Yourself : Looking for feedback by Aaron Schumann

Hi all! My name is Aaron and I work at TV One Productions in Sewell, NJ. I'm a creative director, field producer, shooter and editor. I recently filmed a project in Africa and would like to get some feedback on it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f_m_wMdf2Qg We mostly do TV commercials for local businesses and lot of corporate video stuff. We are always looking for shooters, editors and general talent and crew. Check out our website: http://tvoneproductions.net/ Thanks!