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When a young cow with Asperger's Syndrome is taken from a farm by a scorned alien bull, the abducted youngling is rescued and recruited by a group of adventurous and skilled teenage cattle to thwart an invasion of their homeworld.
SYNOPSIS:
Logline: An orphaned, intelligent alien young cow is cast off to Earth to live in hiding before being abducted back onto his home planet by an evil organization of mysterious forces, forcing him to go on the biggest adventure that he never asked for.
Nutshell: Guardians of the Galaxy meets Home on the Range
Comparables: Star Trek: Prodigy / Zootopia / G-Force / Voltron / Thundercats
Rating/Target Audience: TV-Y7/Ages 8-12
Format: Feature
Personal connection: Inspired by a recent visit from my nephew with Asperger's. This is a story to inspire us all to see the value in those with special needs.
Feature script available upon request.
To download the feature pitch deck, click here.
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Jim Boston Maurice Vaughan Nate Rymer Thanks so much for the great ratings!
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You're welcome Leonardo, this is a brilliantly unique premise for an animated TV series! :)
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That's very kind of you, Nate Rymer . Thank you so very much for taking the time.
Nelson Christian Amador Hey Nelson - thank you so very much for the high rating!
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Your welcome Leonardo anytime man.
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Thank you Debbie Elicksen for the high rating. So kind!
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Thank you Michele Traina !!
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As someone on the spectrum, I am intrigued! But may I suggest that “Asperger’s Syndrome” is no longer an appropriate description? (Lots of info online as to why.) Also, most autistics would like your logline better if it read “When a young autistic cow…” In other words, the cow is autistic, not the cow “has” autism.
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Mark Miller Thanks so much for the kind rating!
Cheryl Boyles Hey Cheryl! Thanks so much for the info. Looks like it's time for some research! AND thanks for the high rating!
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Nathaniel Baker Thank you so much!
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Ashley Renee Smith Thank you so much for the kind rating, Ashley!!
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Thank you so much Rich Wingerter . Much obliged!
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Thanks Matthew Gross for the awesome rating!!
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As someone who was probably diagnosed as autistic when I was a kid, I can see why this would work for this specific demographic. Mission Impossible-meets-Zootopia, not a bad concept.
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Thanks so much @Marcel!!
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Rutger Oosterhoff Thank you so much Rutger. Very kind!
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Sarah Kennedy You are so kind, Sarah! Thank you!!
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Love the pitch deck as well, absolutely excellent. Can't wait to eventually see this!
Thanks a ton David Foy Bauer . Really good to meet you yesterday!
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Thank you @Irene!
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I think this is cleaver!!
Thanks Mark Gosney!
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This one made me laugh Leonardo Ramirez because it reminds me of an animation Idea I had called CowPatty about a cow name Patty. I love this!!!
Haha! “CowPatty”! Love it! Thanks so much for the ratings @Mark Deuce!