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HAMMY THE PIG SAVES THEIR BACON
By Guy O'Neal
After surviving the stun gun, which gives him superpowers, Hammy the Pig must return to the dreaded abattoir and rescue the other farm animals. But his powers are intermittent, affected by his low self-esteem and gut-wrenching fear of Burly The Butcher.
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Hi, Folks thanks for your ratings. I submitted a written Pitch and got very good feedback from an executive--not sure if it is right to mention his name at this time, but on a scale of 1 to 5 the project scored 6 4s and 1 5( for CLARITY of PITCH).
So by the grace of God, I'll work on the weak areas, finish the full script and resubmit. Thanks.
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