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A recent college grad drags her high school boyfriend cross-country to pursue her life-long dream of playing a princess at storybook amusement park, Dreamland, only to discover that the world of fairytales is just as unforgiving as our own.
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Michael W. Orick Thank you SO much for this helpful note! I apologize I am just seeing this. I struggled with the stakes aspect as I am fearful of giving away too much of the plot, however, I see how the Little Miss Sunshine logline does this very effectively. I am going to add the aspect of her not "Fitting the princess mold" as we explore aspects of self worth and identity.
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