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Edward Alexander Constance Levi, High Mage Of The Kingdom Of ROTAS, sent to The Village In Between the Two Peaks of Mount Rotasator (pronounced Rotasatore’) in order to find and execute, by means of hanging, a supposed demon hiding amongst the villagers. But a far grander secret may perhaps be hiding within the dense fog which fills the village roads at night, a secret capable of turning the world upside down, and the hanged man upright. As LEVI learns more each episode about the socio inter workings of the villagers, will his curiosity stray him from his duties? Is there really a demon hiding here from the dark side of the mountain? And if so, who? What is the nature of the village, and what is the nature of the world, and the self? New Episodes will be posted here on stage 32 periodically, alongside an eventual polished pitch Bible and full series outline! Stay tuned and enjoy! Tidings of all sorts!
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Unnecessarily cryptic and pretentious. An anti-logline.
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Ya’know what, I agree! Thank you for the feedback Philo Kvetch. I actually came up with that on the fly as I was posting and really didn’t like it, the new one I’ve just posted also isn’t the “official” final logline for the series so let me know what you think of the update :)
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After a powerful magician discovers a demon might be hiding in a village within his kingdom, he undertakes a desperate investigation to reveal and slay it before the villagers are slaughtered.