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THE MEDDINGS
By Brooke EM
A family of a superpower-five-family set out to fight a superpowered foe who robs people to support his downward finanical situation.
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A family of a superpower-five-family set out to fight a superpowered foe who robs people to support his downward finanical situation.
THE MEDDINGS
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I like the concept, and that's a unique villain motivate, Brooke EM. I wouldn't use "family" twice, and I'm not sure what "superpower-five-family" means.
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hI Brooke EM! I'm with Maurice on the "superpower-five-family" phrase. I would change it, I think it's meant to be "superpowered family of five", but you could just say "superpowered family" and I would even add "in suburban America" or something to add to the world. Hope this helps!
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