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In a world where agelessness is possible, scientist Yuri, haunted by his parents' loss to Late-Stage Ageless Dementia, delves into the neurology of hallucinogenics to find a cure. His quest takes an unexpected turn when the treatment he develops has dire side-effects.
It's good but could be a little tighter.
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In a world where nobody ages, a scientist's attempt at a cure for late-stage dementia via hallucinogenics will unleash dangerous side effects.
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