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Two male tourist take a site seeing trip to one of the islands in the Bahamas. But later discovered that the islands urban legend wasn't myth.
SYNOPSIS:
Josh and Noah are two friends that takes a trip to one of the islands in the Bahamas to visit the island's famous" blue hole". On their way to their destination a taxi driver, decided to inform the two about the island's urban legend which neither Josh nor Noah didn't believe. When Josh and Noah arrived at "The Blue Hole International Park", they were both filled with excitement. Through the pine forest they went as they began site seeing, taking pictures as they head to see the blue hole. When they arrive to the blue hole, they were so amazed at the beauty of it. Then they began to hear strange noises. The two ignore the noise and decided to take a dive into the blue hole. After Josh and Noah had finished taking a dive into the blue hole, they changed into dry clothing and started making their way back before night began to fall.
Suddenly they found themselves trapped in a cave in the pine forest. With fear and anxiety settling in, Josh and Noah yell for help. To their surprise, an unfamiliar creature stands over them, stares them both in the eyes with its red piercing eye. Noah who is very afraid starts to hit the creature. The unfamiliar creature snatches Noah and fly's off with him. Moments later, Josh decided to look at a map that showed different creatures that live within the pine forest. There he sees the island urban legend, that reads " if you are nice to the creature, it will bring you luck, if you are not, it will harm you". Soon the creature then came back to the cave staring at Josh with its red piercing eyes. Josh who is afraid, decided to be nice to the creature. The creature then takes Josh out of the cave. The taxi driver that dropped Josh and Noah off came back looking for the two with policemen.
The taxi driver and the police didn't believe Josh's story about the urban legend carrying his friend. Josh who is now all alone and sad, ends up receiving a text to his phone where he received 250,000,000. to his account. Giving up on finding his friend after receiving money Josh decided to hop on the airplane and leave the island.
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