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GRAVE CONCERN

GRAVE CONCERN
By Mark Deuce

GENRE: Thriller, Horror
LOGLINE:

When seven teen hikers profane a forsaken Native American burial ground on the Appalachian Trail during spring break, they awaken a savage ancient curse—unleashing grotesque, zombie-like specters that stalk them through a suffocating forest, mirroring the visceral carnage that devoured their parents decades ago.

SYNOPSIS:

"Step Off the Trail, Unleash the Grave—Your Blood Feeds the Curse."

"Seven teens on a spring break hike stray off the Appalachian Trail and desecrate a Native American burial ground, igniting an ancient curse that awakens grotesque, flesh-hungry spirits. As the forest turns against them, they uncover a chilling truth—their parents met the same grisly fate in ’88. It’s a visceral horror-thriller where every step off-path is a death sentence, and the only way out might be spilling their own blood to appease the relentless dead."

Holly Fouche

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Holly Fouche

Nice! It gives off some Until Dawn and Phasmophobia vibes. Not sure if that was the goal, but it can be amazing if executed well!

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

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Sydney S

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Mark Deuce

THANK YOU SO MUCH Holly Fouche FOR THE PERFECT RATING and Amazing Feedback. And that is exactly what I would love to see as well. Cheers!

Mark Deuce

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE PERFECT RATING Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

Mark Deuce

Sydney S THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE PERFECT RATING!!

Patrick "PK" Koepke

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Patrick "PK" Koepke

The Appalachian Trial is a perfect backdrop for a horror story. Good stuff, Mark.

Marcos Fizzotti

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Ed McDonald

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Mark Deuce

I totally agree Patrick "PK" Koepke and their are so many horror stories that surround the AT as well and plus I grew up around there as well.

Mark Deuce

THANK YOU SO MUCH Ed McDonald FOR THE PERFECT RATING!!

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