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In the aftermath of a devastating prison break turned city-wide crisis, a resilient team of government operatives must navigate a web of conspiracy and chaos orchestrated by a cunning lobbyist, a rogue war criminal, and a corrupt senator, as they race against time to uncover the truth and prevent further catastrophe."
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Sounds thrilling, Paul Antonucci! Almost solid logline. I think you should change "must navigate" to "navigates" and make the logline shorter (it's 51 words right now).
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