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An egotistical tyrant’s ruthless determination to win his love interest over to his dark vision may be his Achilles heel in his quest for absolute global control.
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The complex love triangle of WAR AND PEACE meets THE DEVIL'S ADVOCATE/ CHILDREN OF MEN with female lead
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The Omega Plan is the hair-raising sequel to The Beta Plan, and is the third and final part of the PROJECT CODE-X TRILOGY. Mystery, suspense, intrigue, romance, action, excitement... The Omega Plan has it all... and much more. Where The Alpha Plan brought context and The Beta Plan brought action, The Omega Plan will bring the PROJECT CODE-X series to a dramatic close as a book full of revelations. How will Rebeka reconcile the secrets of her past with the conflicts of her present? And what will that mean for the people whom she holds dearest of all? Find out in this last installment of this gripping series.
The Omega Plan is an adaptation of the book PROJECT CODE-X, OMEGA IS THE END by the same writer.
PROJECT CODE-X , The Omega Plan *
Script preparation and research is currently underway, and story notes can be discussed at length with any interested parties. This is the third installment of a meticulously constructed "high concept" thriller franchise (think Star Wars, only mostly self-contained in the first installment, then scope expanding gradually). For now, I can provide a clear and concise 2 Page Summary outlining the whole story conception. There are two fully completed scripts, which precede this final installment (please read my two previous loglines and synopses), which can be requested today. All scripts are based on my own novels and have been adapted by me, the sole author. Get in touch with me if you have any questions or would like to schedule a video call.
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Thanks Marcos, is there anything you would change>??
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Thank you Lynn. Anything you would change>>??
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Points to an exciting premise for a climax.
Thanks Robert Sacchi and thank you for your suggestion on how to improve it!
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Thank you Val Chernyavskiy I feel that too. Any ideas on how to zest it up?
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Perfect. I've never read mystery/sci-fi but if I did, Project X is where I'd start.
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Sounds like you have all the elements for a captivating movie Sarah Jane Mc Carthy
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Thanks, and thanks for your PM Adam Carpenter
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Thank you so much @Sarah very grateful!
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Sarah Jane...since the other books included the broader threat to the world, it seems you'd want to have that element in the Logline of the last book of your trilogy. Wishing you all good fortune with what promises to be a very engaging and thrilling read/view.
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Thank you @Pamela. Your suggestion is taken on board, I'm so grateful for your comment.
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Awesome @Shaun thanks!
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Sarah Jane Mc Carthy you got a hell of good slate of films.
I looked at IMDB "Keywords" and here is a short list of Female Protagonists in the slates of films that made money. Mystery: The Twilight Sage, Divergent. SciFi: Alien, the Hungry Games, and all things now owned by Disney.
There is one someone who worked on any of those films who might become the champion of your Project Code-X adaptations being made into to films. Good Luck.
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@Paul thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a kind and insightful comment. I like the films you mention and love things that are a bit dark, mysterious and challenging. I appreciate your well wishes so very much! Sarah
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Appreciate that Arthur, thank you :)
Thank you so much Mirella Muffarotto !