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FINDING ELPIS
By Banafsheh Esmailzadeh
A music band, upon getting abducted by a superfan alien on their final show before breaking up, learn that they're galactic superstars and simply unpopular on Earth.
FINDING ELPIS
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Hello!
in the logline, you need to write the hero's goal and the obstacle, the difficulty, the problem that needs to be solved. For example, an alien fan kidnaps a rock band of losers and they find out that they are very popular outside of Earth. now they have to tour the galaxy and meet the expectations of a huge number of fans.I am not criticizing your story, but only pointing out the problem in the logline.
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Thank you Arthur Charpentier, I do like how clean your logline is :) I'll definitely keep it in mind going forward.
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