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FINDING ELPIS 4: THE BALLAD OF FALLEN STARS
By Banafsheh Esmailzadeh
The galaxy's most popular band, armed with a new member and songs, defends their crown against an upstart idol and two rival bands, while their frontman contends with his newfound identity and a new-old foe plots revenge.
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This sounds exciting, Banafsheh Esmailzadeh! Great job on the logline! I think it'd sound better if you changed "must defend" to "defends" and "has to contend" to "contends" though.
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Thank you Marcos Fizzotti and Maurice Vaughan :D I'm getting better at loglines, w00t~
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You're welcome, Banafsheh Esmailzadeh. Woot woot.
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You're welcome, Banafsheh Esmailzadeh.