THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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PLASTIC LOVE
By Banafsheh Esmailzadeh
A love triangle between a flighty stage actress, her college boyfriend and her shy secret admirer from high school quickly spirals into an epic saga when she decides to date both of them.
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Great title, Banafsheh Esmailzadeh! I think the logline needs the story goal and stakes. Right now, it's just the setup.
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Thank you Maurice Vaughan, it's one of my novels that I'm thinking of rewriting, though I personally like that it's a bit of a random-events plot rather than a linear storyline.
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You're welcome, Banafsheh Esmailzadeh. Sounds interesting. I've never thought about writing a random-events script before. It might be fun.
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Maurice Vaughan I rather like random-events plots for some easy reading/watching. Opens up to lots of different ideas that may or may not turn into bigger storylines, it's especially good if you're trying for a comedy. I know yonkoma, or 4-panel manga, practically run on it.