Robb Kettler's Lounge Discussions

Thank you very much!!! That's very kind of you, Janet.

You are welcome.... thank you for the invite... I certainly am impressed... Love your voices.

Only the truth my friend.... You really are awesome to listen too with all the different voices.

You have the tools...now it's up to your sense of business and how you shmooze with people

Hey Steve i was in L. A . last yr ,and except for the high rent ,its a great place to get started you can meet almost anyone on the street. need a room mate ? i'll go back just completed a new screen play, i would like to pitch ? plus ! theirs is a lot of extra work, to be had ...... think good things brother !!!! it will happen................rk ohio

Hi Nikki There are a variety of options open to you, you're a writer. Just make sure that you are happy with the ending, and that it fits with the character, the tone and the genre of the piece. If the feedback was just down to one individuals personal taste then you can disregard it. If you have a number of people who have read the narrative telling you this ending is not working, then you may wish to reconsider. You will kick yourself if your project gets made, you change the ending and all the viewers hate it and thought you copped out. This is one of the reasons why you should never write just to please people ( I am not saying you are). All the best with it. It sounds like you are doing all the right things and will come to the right choice.

Sounds like it has the making of a great movie.... go for it lass....

I just like happy endings.... sighs

Just read again... I see Raven ATTEMPTS to get them out of that situation..... and the child is killed before SHE CAN ESCAPE it... that changes it a little in regards to her having ANOTHER CHILD. She TRIED to get out, but, too late.... I was thinking... what if.... the child is taken.... disappears without trace... Raven presumes she must be dead.... was it pay back for something? When she moves on, maybe she finds herself in another abusive situation... maybe raped by the abusive partner... she has another child. As the years go bye... Raven feels the remorse....But,. the first child somehow finds her way back to her mother.... Just a thought.... I really love your idea, and feel it... just reading about Raven makes you feel the emotion of the situation.... Would be nice to see Raven come out the winner in the end, against all odds..... regardless of what folk around her thought.

Or, the child died of natural causes... Raven blames herself... But, in truth she is not to blame...Getting pregnant to an abuser see's her having another baby.. Her remorse for having another child, is great.... feeling responsible for the death of the other. But, as time goes bye something comes up, to make her realise, that her child died of a natural cause, not due to her own feeling of neglect. I really LIKE your story lols... If I am sticky beaking, tell me to waddle onwards....

nice, enjoyed

Very interesting!

wow....I would want to see it!

I would love to see it with the English sub titles and if you want it to crossover, you should think about a remake in English. It is strong visually plus the moody piano works well too :)

Nice job, Isis.

wrote a song about it, what to hear it, here it go ,,,this is great and funny wow

thinking about Cincinnati ???

Wisconsin?

The snowball starts rolling slowly... If we get enough people to chirp up we can get our trusted webmaster to help build this tool...

I'm in Southern IL and would love to meetup!

Just do it Robb! I don't know where you are but wherever it is just start! Take classes, both in person and online. Then when you feel comfortable enough, start auditioning for community theater and student and/or independent films. Set out to create a body of work and follow the dotted line to your dream. Anything is possible and the chances are you will succede beyond your wildest dreams if you just believe. I started very late in life because I was to "stupid" to know that you "can't" begin an acting career in your fourties. It was a good thing that nobody had the heart to tell me the truth. This is what I've done because I didn't know I "can't". http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1325037/ Big love!

Love your spirit, Rafael! Awesome post!

Thanks RB! You know my gospel, "If you don't know you can't, then YOU CAN!" Big love!

Perfect, Rafael...Just perfect. Big love right back at ya, my friend.

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