Reading your first pages was a pleasure. I could visualize every inflection, every subtle movement. Will get back to it. But just wanted to say how refreshing and effortless it is to read a well-written script.

oops, I didn't realize it was a short...

Sorry Annie, didn't realise you'd had a look at the short, so first many thanks for looking and commenting, and secondly thanks for such kind comments on my writing, really appreciated.