I just read the first ten pages. No problems on the formatting side. A lot of action but the story seems oddly incoherent, the characters are flat and not particularly engaging and the writing lacks a distinctive voice. I'd spend more time developing three dimensional characters. Best of luck with the script.
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I just read the first ten pages. No problems on the formatting side. A lot of action but the story seems oddly incoherent, the characters are flat and not particularly engaging and the writing lacks a distinctive voice. I'd spend more time developing three dimensional characters. Best of luck with the script.
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