Those who have read my comedy - in England- have loved it. I've submitted two written pitches to Happy Writers and the same word appeared in both rejections... offensive. And that's just the pitch! While I think a strong emotional response is a good sign, the negative reception here is going to stop...
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I’m delighted that Daniel Vang from Benderspink has requested to read my screenplay White Snake. Without Joey’s inspired idea of providing a gateway to the professionals through pitching, I’d still be trying to figure out how get this screenplay read. I am a Happy Writer.
Gareth, that's the news us Stage 32 members like to hear. Much success.
I am a complete newbie to screenwriting. I have settled on trying Celtx as my scriptwriting software as it seems pretty user friendly, easy to use, will auto format in the right style for me and, importantly, it's free! I can also access the Celtx Studio from my PC and my MacBook and from the iPad's...
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Power Structure is good and Inspiration 9 for brainstorming but a note book is best.
SuperNote Card from Mindola is by FAR the best thing I've seen...
I am now using Contour. It is excellent and has exposed loopholes I thought out and fixed before I got writing. Might not be for everyone, but has definitely helped clarify my plot, build my story and kept me focused
I've heard of Plot Control, I actually tried the trial they offered. But I'm in rewriting stage now with a couple of scripts. So when I start a new one I may try it.
Well the pen & paper method is the most direct connection with our brain so, it's also my favored. Having said that, developing an entire plot structure on paper could be quite the challenge so: Plot...
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Hello, I'm a producer currently looking for psychological thriller scripts in a final form. I've produced hit shows for A&E, Spike, Syfy, TLC, Speed, CBS, CNN..... Looking forward to interacting with the community during this journey. Jen
What kind of psychological thriller? Crime? Drama? Do you have film examples? Do you have a filming location preference? Thanks.
Hi Jennifer, I'm currently working on a psychological thriller spec that I hope to query you with once it's ready. If you're open to a suspense thriller, THE TURNING SEASON is "a somber and yet riveti...
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Hi Jennifer, I have a kick ass psych thriller called INCARNATIONS, aimed at the teenage market. This screenplay introduces the Next Life Corporation which could be the vehical for francise spin offs. Incarnations is a big budget endeavour with huge potential. Let me know if you like to read.
Hi Jennifer. Judging by earlier discussions I have seen, you certainly won't lack for offers of scripts and log lines. Have fun as the world descends onto your inbox.. until it takes on a life of its own....
Hi Jennifer. Are you still looking for a script?
Just joined this very second! Looking forward to contributing, sharing, networking.
Hi guys. Welcome to stage32. Please refer to our getting started section if you need help with anything. Feel free to reach out to me if you need anything
Welcome Christine. Great to have you on board. I hope you make lots of fun, wonderful, and hopefully useful connections here. All the best with your productions. Well done on your current successes.
Welcome, Christine! Great to have you here.
Hello Christine! :)
Welcome Christine! So glad to have you here. This will probably help you immensely to get familiar with the site. 1st, go to "Help" "Getting Started" (top right), that's 4 quick screens that will give...
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What are the best books used to start your screenwriting journey.
The Hollywood Standard by Chris Riley taught me the fundamentals.
Some excellent books have been suggested, but unless I missed it, I STRONGLY suggest The Screenwriter's Bible by David Trottier - current version I think is the "6th edition" - you cannot go wrong with this book.
"How to Write a Film in 21 Days" By Vicki King and "The Complete Screenwriters Manual" Stephen E. Bowles... Oh and Final Draft!! All you need!!
Writing for Emotional Impact by Karl Iglesias is great to read and for reference.
Writing A Great Movie by Jeff Kitchen. Heard him speak at a conference and he was fantastic!
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You should send your script to get coverage. Also send it to a few people who don't know you and that will give you an honest feedback. It's the best way to get honest advice. Fat comedians...make a ton of money making fun of being fat.
I have heard British and American senses of humor are very different, so it could be this general variance in taste that has limited your success in the States. Given that being overweight is often fe...
Expand commentI have heard British and American senses of humor are very different, so it could be this general variance in taste that has limited your success in the States. Given that being overweight is often fertile ground for comedy in America, I would hope that losing weight should not be taboo. Obviously never having seen the script, I think the concept would be strongest if you can use potentially offensive situations to get at the truth about obesity and weight loss and deliver a powerful message in the end. I have to say I really like the idea; it sounds like it has a lot of promise.
Shallow Hal. I thought it was one of Jack Black's better efforts. He can be so annoying but lovable. I liked the film.
America is on the 'no bullying' rampage and the First Lady is pushing to make America eat healthy so there are no fat kids. So it may be what you have in your pitch that gets that response. If you would share your logline, maybe we could help in some way. Good luck.
If it's funny, I'll laugh; if it's cruel, I won't.