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SPOT ME
By Karen "Kay" Ross

GENRE: Family, Animation
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A Pixar-esque short about a young ballerina who falls in love with power-lifting and must convince the champion-turned-trainer that she's worthy of his mentorship.

David Santo

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Karen "Kay" Ross

Hey, thanks so much, David Santo!

James Welday

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Rebecca Glazer

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Karen "Kay" Ross

Rohit Kumar Thanks for asking! Young = 6-8 years old, and children aren't allowed in adult gyms, especially with professional trainers. Also, she's a girl.

Pattana Thaivanich

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Pattana Thaivanich

Karen,

Interesting! For such a young ballerina (6-8?) is interested in power lifting. You mean the spinning body lifting? Maybe you can hint in the logline — if it’s not gonna be too long — why so. Is it about a crush on the weight lifting spinning champion, potential her partner?

Genevieve Cadorette

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Maurice Vaughan

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Karen "Kay" Ross

Thanks for your feedback, @Pattana! In this case, no, it's the Muscle Man powerlifting like how Arnold Schwarzenegger started, but that brings up a great point - maybe concept art would help!

Judith Grace Bassat

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Rebecca Jean-Carroll

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James Bennett

Id watch this!

Was just reading up the comments. Power lifting is purely for strength, but body building is what Arnold did, for aesthetic (mr world etc) Both are awesome and would work in context to story.

James Bennett

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D. Marcus Chucxz

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Tasha Lewis

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Carlv Coleman

Where is the consequence if he doesn't train her. And if he does train her, she also loses: a grown woman with Arnold Swarzenneger's muscles will have a sexless love life, unless she's dagging.

Carlv Coleman

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Amanda Toney

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Amanda Toney

This sounds really fun Kay!

Steven Blows

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Jim Boston

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Tristan Hutchinson

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Val Chernyavskiy

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Wayne Cothron

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Wayne Cothron

That sounds like a very intriguing story.

You could do a lot with the main character's decision to become a bodybuilder and the effect it has on her friends and family.

Jerzy P. Suchocki

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Kevin Johnson

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Nate Rymer

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Karen "Kay" Ross

I'm just going to reiterate - YOU ALL ARE AWESOME! Thank you so much for the ratings and the feedback. This is what Stage 32 is all about!

And thank you James Bennett for the clarification - I will be sure to change the language!

Jessica B

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Pat Brown

Sounds intriguing.

Nathaniel Baker

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Michele Traina

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Gen Vardo

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Leonardo Ramirez

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