That sounds very interesting! I'd like to see what you come up with when it's finished.

Thank you so much for your reply! I added more to the synopsis. I have the screenplay finished but am looking to learn as much as I can to add more to it or to help polish it up. Again thank you for posting!!

Best advice I can give you is make it your own. Go places with your story that separate you from others that have done this same kind of story. That's what will make your story unique. It's difficult nowadays to come up with an original idea when they're pretty much all taken up already. lol Like myself, I'm a huge zombie fan and with my story (within loglines) I am doing things with it that no one else has - to the best of my knowledge that is. Out of the thousands of zombie flicks that already exist, its hard to go that step further making it original. All I can hope for in the end is that people like the finished product. Best thing to do is put it on the shelf for a bit of time and let it ferment. I have found that even when I get writers block, the sparks fly eventually and I'm back at it again. I do like your story! It sounds very interesting as it is sadistic. It makes people think of the evils one can do even if they come off as being of the greatest intent. I wish you all the best!

This has been updated using final draft and some revisions

Updated again with a new title and logline with the help of Stage32 peeps!