THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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EIGHTY-SIXED
By Delores Wheeler
A single mother moves to the midwest after she buys a rundown bar/restaurant only to learn it has a deep mysterious history.
SYNOPSIS:
Sherry, a middle-aged single parent operates a bar/restaurant desparately in need of repairs with her college aged daughter, Kylie. She unraffles the mysterious past as many different characters visit her place. This is based on the book, "Eighty-Sized: The Romantic Mystery of the Hidden Gold Treasure," which is available on Amazon.
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restaurant
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I like the logline and can see shots in scenes. :)
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I like it however I need more; who is the anti-hero. What are the stakes?
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Intriguing log line.
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I took a stage32 webinar and it veered off topic for a moment to talk about log lines. She suggested using words that evoke emotions. "A downtrodden single mom, desperate for a new start, moves to the midwest buying a delapadated pub with a deep mysterious past". I'm not sure if that is an accurate description of your character but hopefully it gives you the idea the class suggested.
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Hi Delores, I like this approach, especially in the mystery genre. I'd be curious where it goes. All the best!
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Sounds like a fun idea. I'd watch this one.
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Controversy alert: In 2024, our loglines have to give the reader more than, “a deep mysterious history”. Could be great.