A troubled girl who dreams of being a hero finds herself trapped in a dangerous and fantastic land where she must save a beloved princess from a monstrous ruler.
Sounds exciting, Chad Michael Ward! I'd watch this! The only suggestion I have for the logline is to change the second "and" to "where" so "and" doesn't appear two times. I think "a dangerous and fantastic land where she must save a beloved princess from a monstrous ruler" has a better flow than "a dangerous and fantastic land and must save a beloved princess from a monstrous ruler."
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Sounds exciting, Chad Michael Ward! I'd watch this! The only suggestion I have for the logline is to change the second "and" to "where" so "and" doesn't appear two times. I think "a dangerous and fantastic land where she must save a beloved princess from a monstrous ruler" has a better flow than "a dangerous and fantastic land and must save a beloved princess from a monstrous ruler."
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