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FOR THOSE WITH VENGEFUL HEARTS (WORKING TITLE)
By Adam Washington
A dysfunctional family on the verge of collapse must set aside their differences in order to fight back against a local vengeful ex-CEO who they recently exposed as a racist murderer.
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Very very compelling, Adam! I would both simplify & clarify the "local CEO's vicious onslaught" but aside from that, good start!
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Thank you, Angela Cristantello! Do you have any suggestions for simplifying and clarifying the "local CEO's vicious onslaught"? I would love to hear more regarding this feedback.
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