"Writress"? Is the protagonist a writer, a waitress, or both? This initially looks like a misspelling.

I did not know either but it seems this is the word for a female writer.

Unique idea for a Musical, Rutger Oosterhoff. I like the logline. I think it just needs the stakes.

Thanks Maurice! Yes, philip Sedgwick and I are still working on getting it made.

The stakes. Good one,! Probably not clear that the lead and other patients 'WIL KEEP suffering under the bad conditions in the mental facility'. Hoped this could be read in between the lines.

You're welcome, Rutger Oosterhoff. I know Philip Sedgwick. :)

"Probably not clear that the lead and other patients 'WIL KEEP suffering under the bad conditions in the mental facility'. Hoped this could be read in between the lines." I see what you mean, but producers, directors, production companies, etc. might be turned off by the vagueness. I wouldn't want you to miss any opportunities.

I will rethink, but it will be a difficult fix.

Thanks for rating all.

Sorry about the 2-star. I was trying to scroll on my laptop and hit the ratings by accident and now I can't figure out how to delete it.

Hi Reid Johns - Shellie here, Director of Community for Stage 32, I'm working on getting that deleted for you. Thanks!

No problem Reid!! The logline is far from perfect anyway.