I love the story.

Michelle Payne Thank you so much!! There will be a twist at the end. Stay tuned!!

Hi Kevin. Not a bad logline. A couple of notes: you don't really need the character name, it's redundant. Just who he is will suffice. You only really need to mention the name if it's truly pertinent, for example if he is someone we should know. Also: not quite sold on exactly why he decides to join the dating site as someone else. This currently feels like a disconnect, slightly forced. If you can communicate why he chooses this action, then the rest may well fall into place.

Phil Clarke Thank you Phil for the feedback. I'm in the office now setting up the synopsis now. I will add it later to explain the story. Thanks again for the support and have a great day!

Hi Kevin. Is it possible to read your script. The logline looks great

Michael John Yes sir. I will post all my screenplays soon. I am working with my team now to get them all copyrighted for viewers to critique. Thank you sir for your support and feedback. Have a great day!

I would change the arch, at first an arrogant and assertive businessman, but after the main action he becomes more loyal and understands that there are no ideal ones, that we should all accept each other for who we are.

Val Chernyavskiy That's a great idea. I will look at it and keep it in mind.

I hope to see the movie :)

Mirella Muffarotto Nathaniel Baker Grzegorz Bielski Thank you!!!

Ugo Cavallo Thank you my friend! You will soon.

Maybe because he is so successful that he fears a woman showing interest in him for monetary gain? (Doesn't make it right though...lol) Phil Clark does have a point though! A couple of movies come to mind when it comes to this premise. Different stories but a lot of similarities.

Art Thomas Hi Art, currently rewriting about five scenes. Should be done by March.

There might be a major problem with this one. I'm not sure audiences would find a young man catfishing women to be a very pleasing of a notion. Unless I missed something here, there's always that possibility. Making the protagonist a woman might change audience's minds, in my opinion.

It's a decent concept. It's just that it might not be well-received by modern audiences. Just my opinion, of course.

Tony Ray I wouldn't say that he is cat fishing anyone but he is very rich and well known so he is just changing his look up a little to try to get person who loves him for him and not cause he is a billionaire.