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THE LAST RACIST ON EARTH
By Tye Johnson(Adekoya)
A universally thoughtful story that explores historical/modern racial and societal prejudices and what the world would look like if prejudice in all forms were absolved overnight. Follow the struggles of one of the last racist people on Earth.
SYNOPSIS:
This story follows the journey of Cal Friarson, a racist man with a violent past who wakes up one day to find that the world has changed and his struggles to adapt as he is forced to walk a path of self-discovery and retribution.
THE LAST RACIST ON EARTH
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I appreciate this feedback Owen. The proof is more engaging in the actual story itself. I stray away from what "should be" expected in my stories, so I will most definitely put more work into executing a synopsis that will reflect that. Thanks again!
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Owen, there will still be problems as not all of our trials in life are based in prejudice, and our main character goes through difficult lessons in each episode. I am not sure in any context however how having struggles even in a world without prejudice would implicate that prejudice is necessary to our society...
I believe we have enough examples of what it looks like to hate and judge. We don't have any concept of what the world would look like if we didn't. Yes, it is a complex problem and I have created an intricate world full of rich dynamics. A world that maybe we all need to see. There are still struggles and major plot twists; it's not all sunshine and rainbows but it does portray a world that reveals what things would look like if people could actually see "beyond the surface", whatever surface that may be... Call it an "augmented consciousness" if you will.
The story is present in the proof of concept and I recommend you giving it a read.
Namaste,
Tye