THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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By Carolyn Cobb Martin
Based on Actual Events
When a Navy ship transports women and children to Greece, a skirt-chasing sailor and a hot-headed feminist are caught in a “hookup.” To keep the sailor from going to jail they must convince the Captain they are in love and want to get married.
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It is kind of confusing what does transport to Greece have to do with two individuals? And who are the two individuals and why would he go to jail? more accurate details rather than vague descriptions would be good. Remember loglines are a max of 25 words. Best