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WOMAN

WOMAN
By Nicholas P

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

In a village of women, a 21-year-old woman is chosen to meet a man in the midst of the garden and with their numbers being their names.  Not a population of men exist, but the women get an unexpected surprise of a living breathing male. The youngest teenage girl of the women, rebels against the village and builds doubt in some of their minds.

SYNOPSIS:

In a village of being only women, not a man in existence comes but only a man from above. An elderly woman named One reveals the next 21-year-old woman to meet the man in the garden. A woman named Ten is revealed to meet the man in the garden the next day. After Ten is chosen, Thirty, a teenage girl becomes jealous of Ten being chosen and not her. Thirty begins to tell Ten that One can't be the one that knows more than them and that the man from above knows more than her. Rather sit and listen, Ten leaves Thirty to herself, and prepares for the next day.

About to enter the garden, One greets Ten at the gate. Thirty attacks One with her own cane and orders a child she tries to persuade to turn against One. The child wounds Thirty instead of one. Ten comforts Thirty before she enters into the garden. In her last breath, Thirty dies watching her only friend go into the garden.

At the biggest tree in the garden, Ten meets the man and is greeted with a kiss after he stops her from touching an apple.

Ten months later, Ten is the mother of a daughter and is living her happy life in peace.

WOMAN

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Val Chernyavskiy

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Val Chernyavskiy

You can add who is the hero ?, who is the villain ?, what is the goal of the hero ?, what prevents ?. What are the rates? It will be cool.

Nicholas P

Val Chernyavskiy I’ll work on it

Nate Rymer

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Matthew Parvin

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Matthew Parvin

Good start. You need a little more detail and a clearer conflict. Hope these ideas help!

Nicholas P

Matthew Parvin they did

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