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TWO DOTS
By Jay Han-San
Stranger stops a suicide attempt by a girl in the subway.
SYNOPSIS:
You don't need to be an angel to save a soul. Just be there on time. Every time.
TWO DOTS
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Hey, Jay Han-San - I love this idea, but I don't know the complication that arises from this inciting incident. Is there something I should know about the stranger? Are we following the journey of the stranger or the girl? Is there a way that her involvement in his life saves him, too?
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