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MAGIC REBORN
By Billy Kwack
SYNOPSIS:
A unique creature born in space lost finds and falls in love with a magic Earth as a baby. It learns rage from life on Earth, it rages back and kills, not meaning to. It's sad, crying, it goes to sleep, sorry for what it's done. 1,000 years later it wakes up and binds with an innocent child Mightyn, the wizards and others find out, they need help and must fight
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Short and concise logline. Good synopsis.
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Thank you again Nate
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You forgot a comma and a period in the log line and made me sort it all out. Haha. That's what the one star ranking is for. Otherwise, very cool. Great idea.
Thanks Amman
But the synopsis we'll have to work on. No question about that.
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Two Kacee, come on
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Love it, Billy! Forget about that one comma. It's all about great ideas in the end after corrections. :)
Thank you Evelyn
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I like this because It hints at a diverse cast of characters, including wizards and warriors, which suggests that the story will have a rich and varied world-building.
One suggestion for improvement:
The logline could benefit from a little more specificity about the conflict and stakes.
I could see this being a very immersive story. Great job
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Hi Mista, sorry for the late response, but thank you
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Thank you Vincent, Kay, Asharf, Tasha and Bobby
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Thanks Nathaniel