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MOM FIGHT CLUB

MOM FIGHT CLUB
By Maurice Vaughan

GENRE: Action, Comedy
LOGLINE:

After receiving a foreclosure notice, a single mom who doesn’t accept help participates in a tag-team fight club for moms so she can win money to keep her house.

SYNOPSIS:

Action/Comedy short script for sale

Sub-genres: Contained/Fighting

Budget: Micro

Synopsis:

In a flashforward scene, Emilia Smith, a single mom who doesn’t accept help, puts makeup on her bruises after losing at Mom Fight Club, a tag-team fight club for moms.

As her young daughter gets ready for school, Emilia reads a foreclosure notice. Emilia’s best friend, Dakota Greene, tells her about the fight club and the money they could win together.

Emilia has an interview with Mama Bear, the founder and leader of the fight club. Emilia gets into the club.

Emilia and Dakota fight two entitled, annoying moms named Karen and Karen. Emilia and Dakota lose the match because Emilia won’t tag Dakota in.

During their second fight, Emilia and Dakota fight a big, intimidating mom named Crush and a small, fierce mom named Lil Crush. Emilia and Dakota lose the match because Emilia won’t tag Dakota in.

Worried about losing her house, Emilia calls Mama Bear and asks for a big fight.

Emilia tells Dakota about the fight. Dakota gets angry because Emilia caused them to lose the other fights. Emilia reveals why she never accepts help.

Emilia and Dakota fight the toughest moms in the club, two soldier moms named Ranger and GB. Emilia and Dakota win the match because Emilia accepts Dakota’s help.

Three weeks later, Emilia still has her house. Dakota calls, telling her they have another fight.

Potential: Feature script

Thanks for hearing my pitch. Message me on Stage 32 or email me with any questions.

Poster: Poster made with Canva.com

MOM FIGHT CLUB

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JR Rodriguez

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Maurice Vaughan

Thanks, JR Rodriguez!

Scott Sawitz

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Evelyn Von Warnitz

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Billy Kwack

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Vikki Harris

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Maurice Vaughan

Thanks for rating, Scott Sawitz!

Maurice Vaughan

Thank you, Evelyn Von Warnitz!

Maurice Vaughan

Thanks a lot, Billy Kwack!

Maurice Vaughan

Thank you, Vikki Harris! I appreciate it!

Adam Brandt

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Adam Brandt

Sounds like fun!

Curt Samlaska

LOL...you should throw in a little mud wrestling. This sounds like a great comedy...

Billy Kwack

Hi Maurice, did you see the eagles play?

Maurice Vaughan

Thanks for rating and commenting, Adam Brandt!

Maurice Vaughan

It's a micro-budget short, so I had to hold back on the fights, Curt Samlaska. Thanks for the suggestion though.

Maurice Vaughan

Hey, Billy Kwack. I didn't watch the game, but I saw the score. The Eagles and Steelers lost. :( I have three NFL teams. Eagles, Steelers, and Panthers.

Nate Rymer

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Billy Kwack

Hi Maurice, awesome, go Lions

Tasha Lewis

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Vlad Cocos

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Maurice Vaughan

Thank you, Tasha Lewis!

Maurice Vaughan

Thanks for the perfect rating, Vlad Cocos!

Maurice Vaughan

The Lions might win the Super Bowl this year, Billy Kwack.

Billy Kwack

Hi Maurice, yes I hope, fingers crossed

Rutger Oosterhoff

This reads like insane fun!!

Rutger Oosterhoff

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Maurice Vaughan

Thanks, Rutger Oosterhoff! I really appreciate it! I wanted to write a fight club script, but I wanted it to be different than the fight club movies that are already out. MOM FIGHT CLUB has two big differences: moms fighting and a tag team fight club.

Rutger Oosterhoff

Yes, feels original.

Maurice Vaughan

Thanks, Rutger Oosterhoff. I'm aiming to sell the short script. If I don't, I might write it as a feature and pitch it.

Lee Matthias

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Lee Matthias

Maurice Vaughan Terrific premise! Love Karen and Karen!!! And Crush and Lil Crush!!! You should get it to Ed Norton to direct!

Maurice Vaughan

Thank for the rating, @Lee! And thanks for the idea!

Jim Boston

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Maurice Vaughan

Thanks for the perfect rating, Jim Boston!

Michael Dzurak

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Maurice Vaughan

I appreciate the rating, Michael!

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