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GARDEN OF EDEN
By John Mezes
Attempting to save his career, a self-destructive actor scarred by personal tragedy travels to a foreign country to star in a film and falls victim to a dangerous criminal dating agency while also finding a forbidden love.
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GARDEN OF EDEN
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Really neat premise, John! I love the setup!
Take my advice with a grain of salt, but I think your logline will flow better if you omit some of the punctuation. For example (In an attempt to save his career, a self-destructive actor scarred by tragedy travels to a foreign country to star in a film but uncovers and falls victim to a dangerous criminal dating agency.) Excellent work!
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Interesting concept. The "drama" part could draw me in.
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