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THE 40
By MB Stevens
After humanity’s destructive ways start the apocalypse, an optimistic God captivated by the number 40, gives a down-on-his-luck fry cook the ability to heal one soul a day for forty days to find one soul worthy of a second chance before it’s too late.
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Very original, MB! The way I read your logline is (Depressed, broke and dissatisfied with his work options, a destitute ex-con reluctantly attends a Midwest church service and leaves with the ability to physically heal 40 people.) but I'd like to know more about what's at stake for your main protagonist. His soul? His life? More prison time? What exactly does he have to lose other than a dead-end job? Apart from that I think you have an awesome story here.
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I think the logline gives enough detail. It could even be shorter, yet take that note you got and make it one sentence
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This is a great story, but I agree with Frank. Stakes would wrap it up into a nice logline bow. Good job!
Haha..I love it.
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