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After receiving the visit by two vandals, the room of an abandoned castle tells its own story.
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Have you ever wondered "if this walls could speak, what story would they tell?" Tha's the idea when two teenagers vandals enter in an abandoned castle in order to steal precious objects but all they find is and empty room full with dust and ashes.
But when they leave, a story is being told by the ashes...
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Thank you Barry for your precious feedback
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Good first try - but this is not a logline - Research online what a logline is - It must have an incident, a solution, and a hook. Good Luck!
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