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CAGED
By Yamile Vaena
SYNOPSIS:
Nick is a loser middle-aged chinese cook in a rotten 2071´s NYC. He is a gambler. Some goons beat him almost to death, and something triggered inside him. An alarm is fired at the CIA Headquarters, and suddenly, he becomes the most wanted man in the world.
Nick now needs to figure out why and what's happening. He gets the unsuspected help of a low-level agent, Mia, and together they discover their real nature. They are both part of a deeper plan and have an ancient destiny to fulfill. Now they need to decide: end everything or save humanity?
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Hello, Yamile. This is a real nice concept. Just a suggestion for the logline, to make it a little shorter: "When a middle-aged, no-one with a dead-end job is suddenly labeled as the most dangerous person of interest in all International Intelligence Agencies, he has to figure out what is happening and face a huge decision, fulfill his destiny or save humanity."
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maybe this is a good idea for a movie, but there are a lot of common words in the logline.
the hero must escape from the special services, because he is... a mutant, a military experiment, an alien, from the family of ancient magicians, the chosen one... who is he?
Thank you both for your feedback.
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Hi, Arthur Charpentier I don't want to give up in the logline why Nick turns into the most wanted person in the world. But it is so well justified in the story, that when he finds out the truth, he understand why is he hunted. It is a funny thing, I dreamed this movie. So I wrote it.
Thank you Marcos Fizzotti I appreciate your kind feedback. I dreamed this movie, and when I woke up I realized it didn't exist, so I wrote it. Hopefully it will find its way into the industry.
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You're welcome, Yamile. Good luck and all the best!