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GIRL UNSURE
By Ellesa Turner
In this Sweet Home Alabama meets Top Chef Dramedy. A young girl will decide her own future from the one her controlling mother has planned .With the help of her 2 quirky best friends. Millie will devise a plan that will take her to places she never dreamed she could go. Even if it means moving from the comforts of her small home town in Ohio to the Big Apple.
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Sounds fun!
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This is pretty good, but I would work on grammar a bit. Also you can take out the comp in the beginning and just focus on the premise. I might also mention the reason for the MC to move - the goal she is trying to achieve. Other than that, I think it's great! Good luck with your project!
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thanks so much everyone. These comments help a lot
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