I like this Logline, but I get the feeling it may alienate some others due to it not focusing on a central character and plot of the story. Also, the witch hunt segment kind of weighs it down when it's separate and not by semicolon.

While this tells me about the project to a certain extent, it's not actually a logline. You need to identify the protagonist, his/her goal, the challenge to reaching the goal and identify the antagonist. Good luck!