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A peculiar retarded man vehemently seeks the enlightenment of his soul, he is hired by a methamphetamine "cook", promising to show him the true path of Divine Transcendence, once the contract ends.
SYNOPSIS:
Gonzo is a special retarded man engaged in a passionate search for the transcendence of his soul in this world. His path crosses that of Travis, who along with his friend Scott, is dedicated to "cooking" methamphetamine. Gonzo's arrival is very timely, Travis and Scott are behind in a delivery to a violent drug lord, who has promised to kill them if they miss the deadline, so they need an extra pair of hands.
Gonzo sets only one condition to work: that Travis shows him the way to enlightenment after the job is done. Travis accepts the deal, but at the end of the contract, things take an unexpected turn.
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In noir films, if the main character is a man, then a femme fatale, if a woman is the main character, then a fatal man. The concept (conflict) from the logline is not clear.
Thanks for the rate and the good pointing Val!