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A talented actor who played a role of a big musical production play discovered that he and his friends are a time travelers and they escaped from a revolution in the past now he have to save himself from getting captured.
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Pretty good up until the last third.
An actor from a big musical production discovers that he and his friends are time travelers that had escaped a past revolution. - Just my take.
Thank you for your comment :) that was a fast one ! But I like it & I can agree with you about the last third .. :)
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