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ASL MOVIE

ASL MOVIE
By David Ramey Gordon

GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE:

== "ASL" == Sexting Movie. Heres a basic idea of what it could be?   Lets do the whole thing where it jumps around to different situations. With a over riding story that connects them in someway. You know how like a adult film sometimes loops multiple scenes together at different spots so they are telling a story.. then start another.. and all skippy... then all come to the next part.. like money shots.. at the same time. It could have that kinda connector.. so like you have all these different story lines getting going.. then jumping.. then coming back. . getting hotter.. jumping.. to a different and new that is just starting out, then gets way funny.. .. and then leaves while still laughing back to one thats taking forever.. and all movie its like that person waiting.. to get .. maybe.?? hooked up. Then its waiting to hear back.. all hot and bothered as a audience.. then mom texts. stuff like that. .. ah. Hey mom. Then it. person not coming back . and phone battery dies... Other places it going cold.. and we just leave when it goes cold. Others that are really hot and heavy, it could really get it going.. then one has to leave. But like.. something happened and didnt get to say.. hold on. kind of things.. as well as.. catfishing. I want to see a audience that is shook from laughter, and fails.. characters waiting for that one to come back.. the rest of the film.. and when it does comes back.. and we saw what happened. its just as good. but not to the audience. Then some other is like.. trying too o o o hard. or not hard enough but thinks they are great at this.. One could be two guys texting a bunch of people sitting high on a couch, and all kinds of conversations at one time going on, that we wouldnt wanna be in with them. . but the convo is convincing.. like CC.. bubbles.. different ways different convos show to keep them in order on who is who is needed. Things like.. filters on different convos is needed. That one could go into two friends also sitting on the couch, same media set up.. also high.. receiving texts from both of them.. and they are hacker style, and saying things back, hacking them, and going thru everything.. coming up with drama from things they have in their computers/phones. As many situations as possible from people that have been in relationships based on distance.. as a thing too. ASL. When then it starts getting hot and you stay there.. if there is a climax, dont stick around... jump to something funny where you are like.. think its over. Then its not. Then have another where its sad how it stays and the whole thing goes south. It needss messages that make a person say.. "what the f.." with different reasons why.. like their phone texted buttons pushed on accident and they were like.. im gonna leave it? and it went bad there.. and then when they try to get it back, it gets worse? lol.. and then leaves . where its now a comic people texting watching this getting deeper into worse, that could end with one agrees to meet, and isnt described well. It needs that element of not like the picture. It needs the element of wrong age posted. It needs the married and lying and trying to have relationship on side.. it has a bunch of material just sitting there. this is all i have. It could have that person that thinks they are alot hotter than they are,, and optioned to post weird not showing as well pics.. but then the person has weird things that make them not as hot, so they are sick of getting tons of messages talking a good game often with.. you are so hott.. into having this one on the line that isnt impressed and not wanting to stay on the date. It also needs to touch on how alcohol creates a bunch of questionable messages when drunk and.. and we wait. and it wanes.. and we laugh. They passed out. stuff like that.

-Thanks

David Ramey Gordon © Copyright  8.9.2020

S Triangle Talent Agency LLC

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SYNOPSIS:

A movie based on Texting that gets hot in multiple spots as well as goes over all the different situations a person that experiences online dating goes thru.

Nathaniel Baker

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