Not bad! Very reminiscent of Quentin Tarantino's early years before becoming successful.

Love it when the starving protagonist is some sort of writer, artist or filmmaker . .. where does one middle aged filmmaker go next to soak up some inspiration ?

Thank you, Rutger Oosterhoff, Jim Boston, Nathaniel Baker, Tasha Lewis, Nonhlanhla, Thomas, and Frank! I appreciate all of you rating and/or commenting on my logline. I apologize for my delayed response, as I just now saw all of these comments. I need to learn how to use the Stage 32 platform more effectively. Again, I apologize for my delayed response and appreciate all of you for taking the time to rate or comment.

LOVE it, Nitara! This is a small thing, but I think that you could split this into two sentences and it would likely flow thaaaaaat much better? But this is fabulous.

Haha -- don't wory Nitara. You're welcome! About the logline. Normaly I would say it is (much) too long. But I feel it is to the point and needs the info you put in. I agree with Angela about cutting it up. But some Europeans would probably opt for the SEMICOLON ( ;) while reading the logline.It gives you the time to take a breather and still say you have a 'one sentence' logline -- it's the best of both worlds. Like: "... her aparment; (cut "and") while she keeps...."

I appreciate everyone’s honest feedback. I was aiming for a one line logline, but I’ve often wondered if I needed to split the sentence up. Thank you, Angela and Rutger! And thank you for the rating, Nate!

Your welcome Nitara Osbourne. Your logline is one sentence. To help you navigate the site better https://www.stage32.com/scriptservices/faq .