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THE RUNAWAY WRITER
By Nitara Osbourne
Torn by a forbidden love, an educated house slave is charged with the mission to escape her Georgia plantation in pursuit of being a published self-help author and motivational speaker in 1860s America.
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Love this! In this logline I really like 'the promise' of a great story, I just don't know yet what that story is; what you have is a detailed 'inciting incident' that begs for more.
I know I don't do justice to the detailed set up of your mind's image and I don't know your story, but just a first try to shorten the logline:
"When a plantation slave flees to the South in persuit of a -- black lives matter -- politics career in the North, ...
... from exile she must succsessfully fight them through debate, or ---- ?hell?... = the story; stakes; losing leads to hell.
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Thank you for the feedback, Rutger Oosterhoff! I appreciate it. I’ll think about how I can make this stronger.
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