THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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LAST DROP
By Rita Lamotte
In a world ravaged by climate change and pollution where water is a precious commodity controlled by a powerful corporation, a single mother struggles to survive as she stumbles upon a terrifying truth.
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I like the concept and the second half of your logline, Rita Lamotte. I think the first half is too long/needs a better flow.
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thanks Maurice Vaughan , I tried to but didn't find yet another version... ;)
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You're welcome, Rita Lamotte. How about: "In a world ravaged by climate change and pollution where water is controlled by a powerful corporation, a single mother struggles to survive and protect her daughter as she uncovers a terrifying truth."