THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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THE SUMMER WE RAN - RED LIST TOP 20 AND STAGE 32 DOUBLE RECOMMEND.
By Bill Taylor
Fearing they’ve killed one of their fellow campers in a prank-gone-wrong, two troubled 14 year-old boys run away into the wilderness where they discover the transformative power of love as they fight to survive the harsh elements and stay ahead of the adults who are searching for them.
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This sounds like a unique story, Bill Taylor, I think the second part of the logline is too long though. It might make a reader winded.
Also, maybe consider changing the order of "where they discover the transformative power of love as they fight to survive the harsh elements and stay ahead of the adults who are searching for them." I say that because it sounds like the main goals of the story are "fight to survive the harsh elements and stay ahead of the adults who are searching for them," so I think those things should go before "they discover the transformative power of love."
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